Week 10 Blog Reviews

Justin Vizcaino-  In your blog post from the 21^st I really liked your first paragraph. In this paragraph you were able to compare the prompt to both animals and how humans changed in terms of gaining power in the past couple of centuries. I also liked how you give your opinion ib how women should not be stereotyped, it was interesting because before you said that, you suggested that women might like the way they are portrayed in music. The reason for my interest in this part is because you didn’t give a definite answer, and that’s interesting because you can’t, nobody can, because  I’m sure some women find power in the music  and some think of it in a completely different way. 

I really enjoyed your blog post from the 19^th. When I first started reading it, I thought it was going to be predictable, but it was very original.  Your style reminded me a lot of Petraccas’.  The problem that I had with it though is, I had a hard time understanding the ending. I read the ending a couple times, I’m still not sure what Thomas’s intentions were.  He crossed out spending time with his brother, but he still wanted to spend time with him.

Tasha Cerimeli- I thought your first paragraph from the 21^st was awesome. Everything about it was interesting. The two things I really liked about it were you started off with a question and then related it to one of the main topics in your post. Also the second thing I like about it, was how you clarified what the music industry is actually about, and you did it with intention of changing the readers perspective. I thought your idea with people using ipods instead of cd and cassette players, put it in a good perspective.  What I would suggest is making a couple more propositions. Also I would  discuss their feasibility, including what the feasibility of the suggestion your already made in your post is.

I thought your post was from the 19^th was very intriguing. I was able to picture what was going on perfectly.  Your were also able to describe your emotions in a way, that I and probably most people who read could tell exactly how you were feeling.  One thing I would suggest is being a little more specific in the beginning, you mention how one of your car accidents was your fault and one was not. You then jump into your story, I got a little confused, maybe informing the reader which story your telling them would make it a little more clear. That was the only part I was confused about.